This life is like a curtain
blowing in the wind
the gusts of air making white ruffles
in the breeze
flowing to and frow with
some irregularity
just stopping long enough...waiting for the next big gust
to set the curtain a flutter again
years pass...the fabric fades and thins
the wind dies down to a faint whisper
written by Josette copy write 20ll
photos courtesy: Flikr
Nice metaphor!
ReplyDeleteI thank you so much for the feel better comment . I do feel better today .
ReplyDeleteHugs, Dottie
The words are very poetic and the curtains blowing in the breeze suit the mood ideally.
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely. A beautiful metaphor on life. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMary
Lovely post.
ReplyDeleteHow lovely!
ReplyDeleteXO,
Sheila
So true, and it can also let others see through to us or not! Hugs!
ReplyDeleteYes, a faint whisper that has seen many a season and has much to tell. What a great start to a faery tale.....Anita
ReplyDeletePretty word picture...
ReplyDeleteGentle Jan. hugs...
So very beautiful and so very you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Have a good Sunday,
ReplyDeleteMaureen
Beautiful! Miss Josette!
ReplyDeleteRosemary...
Well, that was very nice. Love it! Hugs
ReplyDeleteThat was a lovely post. As we get older the fabric indeed certainly fades.
ReplyDeleteand winds can gust through out lives and many times leave us feeling destroyed......then they die down to calm breezes, allowing us to regroup
and get ready for the next storm
this time maybe be a little stronger.